Annotated Summary #1
Jiang F., & Wong A. (n.d). “Study on the Performance of Different Types of PV Modules in Singapore”. https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/stamp/stamp.jsp?tp=&arnumber=1627177
Based on the research, the article stated Singapore would be suitable for implementing solar panels as it is one of the countries that have extra “solar hours” compared to the other countries. Performance of the Solar Photovoltaics system was conducted, and it shows that “poor weather days in Singapore is very low”. Therefore, it simply shows that this island is able to generate tons of renewable energy and supply for its daily needs and it is evident for the implementation of solar energy.
The article provides
detailed information on Solar Photovoltaics and the feasibility of having
solar panels on this island. All the data and analysis conducted, this
helps us in our research project. With the government's support in creating more
clean energy, the reverse solar panel would be able to work alongside the
existing solar panels. Thus, the implementation of reverse solar panels would
be able to assist in combating climate change in Singapore.
Reviewed: Raymond, Sebastian and Shimin
Good afternoon Joshua,
ReplyDeleteI have also skimmed through the above-mentioned research article and found it to be rather wordy. Thank you for this helpful summary!
As I do not know much about solar panels, I found your summary rather intriguing. You mentioned that Singapore provides extra “solar hours” and is ideal for the implementation of photovoltaic cells. I thought this to be very interesting.
Thank you for this annotated summary, and all the best for your report!
With thanks,
Clement Ten.
Dear Clement,
DeleteThank you for spending some time to read up on my annotated summary. I am glad to be able to share with you the background of solar panels. I hope from this summary, you are able to bring something back with you.
Best regards,
Joshua
Dear Joshua,
ReplyDeleteThank you for taking your time in summarizing the article from a very lengthy report.
I'm impressed with how you and your team can implement an improvement to the existing solar panels to further enhance the use of solar panels here in Singapore.
Just one pointer I notice in your summary is on line three of the last paragraph, instead of government you might one to replace it with "government's".
Overall, kudos to your effort.
Cheers,
Raymond
Dear Raymond,
DeleteThank you for feedback. I am glad to be able to share with you information on solar panels. I hope this summary will let you have a better understanding on the enhancement of solar panels in Singapore.
Best regards,
Joshua
Dear Joshua
ReplyDeleteThank you for the insights on the higher amount of "solar hours" Singapore has in comparison with other countries. Given the fact the Singapore experiences less poor weather, it further enhance the feasibility of integrating photovoltaic and thermoradiative technologies.
Good job on your annotated summary.
Regards
Rue
Dear Rue Hong,
DeleteThank you for your kind words. I see that you have a little understanding of the current situation in Singapore. I am glad that this summary is able to reflect on what you had mentioned.
Best regards,
Joshua
Dear Joshua,
ReplyDeleteThank you for summarizing and reviewing through on how Singapore is well suited for the installation of solar panels. I was pleasantly surprised to find out that Singapore is one of the countries with higher "solar hours" with low poor weather days.
Thank you for the good work, this would be great to incorporate into our technical report!
Best Regards,
Shimin
Dear Joshua,
ReplyDeleteThank you for this summary.
I was impressed in how you were able to summarize such a lengthy article into just 155 words.
I learnt that Singapore is a suitable country to implement solar panels due to our ‘extra solar hours’.
You may want to replace “All the data and analysis conducted, this helps us in our research project.” with “With all the data and analysis conducted, this helps us in our research project…” and perhaps you could elaborate more on how it helped with your project.
Cheers!
also Joshua, I think the way the referencing was done is incorrect. This seems to be a journal article, and should not be referenced like a news article.
DeleteYou can read more here: https://libraryguides.vu.edu.au/apa-referencing/7JournalArticles